The clothes are hanging on the line,
the pleasant smell of detergent
mingling with the fresh
afternoon breeze,
swaying softly in time
with it
even though time seems to stop
just for a moment,
going back to something simpler
(as if anything ever existed outside
of Eden itself),
and making one wonder
why there’s a longing inside that’s
triggered by something like
the afternoon breeze
and clothes on the line
Wonderful poetry
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You’re welcome!
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Nostalgic and sentimental; beautiful.
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Thank you! I’m glad it was warm enough down here to hang them out for a while! 😁
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Beautiful and vivid!
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Thank you!
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Really enjoy the way you bring laundry to life in this poem. Thank you for sharing.
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