Poetry

back in time

if i could go back in time

to take back those words i said

in haste

then i would ask for forgiveness

in light of my mistakes

with remorse and all alacrity and

with apology and action, still vulnerable,

because love is still

and it’s always there

as it’s the past’s and future’s present

from one soul to another

in patience, in kindness, in selflessness

to love more each day, your love being

the only thing i’d want . . .

if i could go back in time

9 thoughts on “back in time

  1. This is a little experiment of sorts. I realize it didn’t turn out that great but the intention is that it can be read top to bottom or bottom to top. I should have taken the Cormac McCarthy route and just let you imagine ALL of the punctuation (and believe you me, there’s a lot missing here) but c’est la vie πŸ˜‰

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